Wednesday 11th - Story

Today we stared our story board. We decided to change our ideas.

We are now going to have a girl in her late teens with a mental age of a young child. She will be having a tea party with her dolly and stuffed animals in an isolated part of a park. There will be a flash back of a person snatching away a doll from her and throwing it away. A passer by spots her playing but can only see her with the tea set and a few stuffed animals around a tree that she is sitting opposite. The girl is talking 2 her hand. The girl thinks she is talking 2 her dolly, but the dolly does not exist to anybody else.

The camera goes back to the little girl as she picks up a knife from the table. She runs it across her lips and blood appears. It's like she is applying lipstick but it smuges and looks clumsy. She points the knife fowards and says "want some?" The camerea then gets a shot of a person sitting up against a tree but hunched over like a doll. The person is dead.

The girls make-up on one side of her face will be doll like (with rosey cheeks and long eye lashes) and the other will be like a broken doll (with stitches). We will show one side of the face at a time, starting with the nice side.The dead person will have a dolled up face to. It will be like the bad side of the girl.

We will use long shots when showing the isolation of the girl playing on her own and talking to her hand. Some P.O.V shots when the girl is looking at her doll. Close ups will be really good when we show her face because of the make-up! When showing the dead person I think a low angle would work well because the person is hunched over it will get a good shot of the face.

We will use music like bells and lullabye sounds to create a childish feel. It also can be very creepy. It will be good if we can make it go really wierd leading up to the face of the dead person and it would be like her mind going abit mental.